Giải đề"New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh phân tích đề thi thật IELTS WRITING TASK 2 dạng Advantages & Disadvantages, IELTS TUTOR Giải đề"New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng này thuộc dạng advantages outweigh the disadvantages IELTS TUTOR đã hướng dẫn kĩ cách làm
• Trong bài này nếu cũng xem như dạng opinion essay, là disadvantages hoàn toàn outweigh advantages thì sẽ chia thân bài như sau:
  • Body 1: lí do thứ 1 vì sao mình lại có ý kiến là disadvantages hoàn toàn outweigh advantages:
    • Main idea: Children might develop a passive lifestyle and possibly isolate themselves from society >> A sedentary lifestyle, as a consequence, is gradually developed
    • Supporting idea: This is because this way of entertainment is extremely addictive, and children therefore are likely to spend hours in their room without any communication with the outside world if  exposed frequently (Hoặc: As entertaining programs and apps are extremely attractive, children are more likely to be engrossed in those pastimes and spend less time on physical and outdoor activities)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic Science IELTS
    • Example: My cousin - Billy's shift from active outdoor activities to prolonged video gaming has led to a sedentary lifestyle, diminishing his social interactions and putting him at risk of health issues like obesity, diabetes, and cardiovascular diseases.
  • Body 2: lí do thứ 2 vì sao mình lại có ý kiến là disadvantages hoàn toàn outweigh advantages
    • Main idea: Violent scenes are rife on the internet >> Recent research has linked violent video games with the growth in the percentage of juvenile delinquency
    • Supporting idea: Children, who are incompetent of distinguishing the right and the wrong, may imitate anti-social behaviors and violate the laws is in all probability.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng "RESEARCH" như Noun & Verb tiếng anh
    • Example: A recent study by the National Institute of Mental Health found that exposure to violent media can increase the risk of aggression in children and adolescents.

• Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
  • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
  • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
    • Main idea 1: More choices are now available on computers or any other electrical devices that are connected to the Internet. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "MORE" trong tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • This would satisfy children of different preferences for entertainment, such as watching movies, listening to music or playing games on online platform.
        • Smart devices enable children to explore the outside world without limitations.
        • With a click of the mouse or a touch on the screen, children can effortlessly figure out satisfactory answers for their questions, which broadens their horizons beyond lessons taught at school. >> IELTS TUTOR Giải thích phrasal verb: figure out
      • Example: For example, a child who loves music can listen to songs from all over the world, watch music videos, and even learn to play an instrument online. A child who loves to play games can find games of all genres and skill levels. And a child who loves to socialize can connect with friends and family online, or even make new friends from all over the world.
    • Main idea 2: some useful skills and necessary qualities can be either initially obtained or horned by playing electronic games. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "quality" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Creativity and fast reflexes which are of great use in the future can be enhanced though puzzle or shooting games.
        • Scientifically, racing games help develop motor skills in later life. 
      • Example: For example, puzzle games can help to develop problem-solving skills, critical thinking skills, and creativity. Shooting games can help to develop fast reflexes, hand-eye coordination, and spatial awareness. And racing games can help to develop motor skills and decision-making skills.
  • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
    • Main idea 1: Children might develop a passive lifestyle and possibly isolate themselves from society. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "society" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: This is because this way of entertainment is extremely addictive, and children therefore are likely to spend hours in their room without any communication with the outside world if exposed frequently.
      • Example: My cousin - Billy's shift from active outdoor activities to prolonged video gaming has led to a sedentary lifestyle, diminishing his social interactions and putting him at risk of health issues like obesity, diabetes, and cardiovascular diseases.
    • Main idea 2: exposure to technology could lead to deterioration in health as hours spent on using computers can cause tremendous harm to eyesight.
      • Supporting idea: In fact, children at school age are suffering from short-sight due to playing video games or browsing Facebook for a long time.
      • Example: In 2022, a study published in the journal Nature found that children living in countries with a high prevalence of myopia (nearsightedness) are spending more time using digital devices than children in countries with a low prevalence of myopia.

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